WRITING SUPPORT / DRAFT FEEDBACK
See the argument from the reader's side.
Discuss clarity, structure and how your evidence connects to your point.
The starting point.
Feedback helps you notice where the line of reasoning is clear and where a reader may need a stronger explanation. It should give you decisions to make, rather than replacing your own writing.
What we can discuss
The overall line
Check whether the draft answers the question it began with.
Paragraph purpose
Identify what each paragraph adds and where ideas overlap.
Revision priorities
Separate changes to the argument from later sentence-level polishing.
SCOPE TO AGREE
Ask about draft feedbackComments and a discussion of revision priorities for your own draft. Feedback does not include writing an assessed submission for you.